Money is important in most people’s lives. Although some people think it is more important than others.
What do you feel are the right uses of money? What other factors are important for a good life?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
Money is considered to be the most significant element in anyone’s life. Some people consider it so vital that in their perspective every other thing is secondary. I completely disagree to this phenomenon; there are certain other important factors which can bring happiness in life. This essay shall discuss the appropriate usage of money and the essential elements of a happy life.
There are innumerable rational usage of money that can bring inner satisfaction. The first and the foremost is doing a charitable work. By providing the basic necessities of life to the deprived people, one can enjoy goodness of life. Another important usage is to invest in some productive field that can be beneficial for the masses; such as planting trees or installation of water filtration machines.
Apart from money, factors are many that contributes to one’s quality of life. A good life means social, emotional and physical well-being of an individual. A person deprived of mental peace would certainly lack in achieving life ambitions. Another important factor would be the success in life that one earned. Both success and good life are directly proportional to each other. Last but not the least some personal traits are major deciding factors in one’s quality of life, such as: kindheartedness, affection towards family.
To recapitulate, I reiterate that money is not the only or important factor in one’s life. One can be happy through appropriate use of money as well as strong family bonding. If more people strive in life towards true happiness rather than money; the world would be a better place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...ing a charitable work. By providing the basic necessities of life to the deprived people, one can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, apart from, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20610687023 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88581927994 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568702290076 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6443409751 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.2352941176 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284551832912 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980844583007 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531505759157 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185362965766 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356986771353 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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