It is an undeniable truth that money and happiness are two equal companions in any human life. While few experts believe that prosperity plays a vital role in pleasure, few others differ with that statement and say currency notes have no place in delight. In my opinion, despite several advantages of wealth, other factors such as family relations, being sociable would play a key role in making citizens happier.
To embark upon, there a plethora of ways to utilize cash for good reasons. Nowadays, because of both technological advancements and materialistic lifestyle humans have been living alone, in these circumstances by having deep pockets peoples can not only travel to places where they wish but also own luxury items such as cars, gadgets to name but a few, eventually these would bring joy. On top of it, fortune could assist any person to provide financial stability for the family as well as a sophisticated education for their adolescents. Therefore, it could be one of the right ways to spend it.
On the other hand, there are several things which play a vital role in leading a good life. Firstly, spending quality time with loved ones especially with family members would be essential for contentment. Secondly, either pursuing desires or aims would bring a sense of satisfaction, which is another big thing for the state of happiness. Finally, health is one of the significant factors, as without being healthy one can enjoy neither funds nor any other benefits.
To conclude, although the currency is important for human beings and assist in several ways, it is not the only factor for living. Other elements for instance health, satisfaction, achieving aims are also important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08540925267 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71128137958 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640569395018 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3283914483 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.923076923 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170467816521 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586266439729 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403642360677 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104989542144 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444515476234 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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