Money Is very important factor to achieve happiness many believe it but others believe money is not at all important for happiness. Discuss both views.
Since the inception of our civilization money or wealth has been considered as a crucial parameter to measure person’s prosperity and growth. However can money be directly associated to a person's happiness is a matter of deliberation
money or wealth is the key factor for happiness. it is not only essential to fulfill all your basic necessities, it can help you fulfill all your desire's and wishes as well. it can help you acquire any thing you may like whether it is a luxurious car, house or a holiday trip. further more it can also help children of a wealthy parent to study abroad irrespective of their talent, with power of money they will get admission in world's most renowned institutes. Therefore, it is a critical component for a person to fulfill all their requirements in life and stay happy.
On the contrary few people believe that money is not a factor for happiness. happiness is more associated with the quality of life we live, for example, a small farmer, earning just few thousand rupees in a month would be living quality life with fresh air, fresh food as compared to a wealthy man staying with all the amenities in a polluted city. Moreover if a child is talented and hardworking it would not be difficult for them to get scholarship in foreign universities to do further studies. it is believed that desires are never ending and you can never be satisfied with what you have with you for example if you have a small car, you would dream for a bigger one, but that will not bring happiness in your life.
After discussing both the views it is very evident that though money can certainly help you to buy expensive products and in fulfilling all your desires, it can only bring a brief moment of joy in your life. but it will never bring a long lasting happiness in your life, contentment is what matters. A person should always strive hard to get successful in life, but happiness can never be associated with wealth, it is a matter of inner peace and satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70621468927 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69272909942 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494350282486 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0296872154 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.153846154 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188911709174 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849336954618 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933580885755 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117458156132 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168318669194 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.