More and more people are opting for ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Are there any advantages or disadvantages to this? Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the eating habit of people who live in big cities has changed significantly, an increasing amount of people choosing pre-made food rather than freshly cooked food. This essay will examine both the pros and cons of this change and explain why I suggest people eating fresh food.
People may find it more convenient to eat ready-made food because of its flexibility, sandwiches and bread can be found everywhere. It is quite common these days for office workers to take their breakfast while commuting, eating it on the bus or the street, for winning them more time for sleep or makeup. This is mainly because of the fast-speed lifestyle in cities which result in people has no time to cook. Besides, some people claimed that new eating habit provides the public with more job opportunities such as baker and cashier and therefore boost the economy. The demand for fast food has increased the need to produce them and even get retired people or house women back to the working industry. However, few can deny that AI could replace human for doing such laborious works.
Nonetheless, people should pay more attention to health by keeping with nourishing meals. Research, relating to dietary, has unveiled that fresh food contains the best nutrition. Most of ready-food are made a few days in advance with excessive seasoning and high calories in order to conserve its taste. Lack or imbalance of nutrition may increase the risk of several diseases and endanger one’s health. Besides, people spending more on purchasing pre-made food as the retailer needs a shop and workplace for producing it while those people cooking by themselves only need raw food materials and sauces. That is to say, people eating fast-food needs to work more for paying additional cost. I think people should get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives, and I personally believe health is the cornerstone of everything.
To sum up, ready-made food saves people’s time for cooking and provide more works to society while freshly cooked food benefits people healthy dietary and fewer expenses. I suggest people to eat fresh food when their situations allow.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, therefore, while, i think, such as, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05540166205 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56866924869 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584487534626 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0030608328 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.352941176 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391264388756 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135941182931 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863556915864 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280270255168 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044043901817 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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