Being a well known fact is that, most of the people become materialistic nowadays and they are using more and more private cars for commuting. Which has abundant of hazardous problem such as rising in pollution, reason for accidents. Meanwhile there are some effective measures which can be used for mitigate this critical issue.
Initiating with innumerable crisis which are created by using heavy amount of cars. The cardinal issue is to be considered that pollution is one of the top list which is caused by using private vehicles because cars usually emit detrimental gases such as nitrogen, sulphur and carbon monoxide which is very dreadful for living creatures. Furthermore, traffic congestion or road accident also increase day by day at an alarming rate because cars are widely used by individuals even just for taking short distance. Even, youngsters drive their cars at a very rapid pace. Sometime unfortunately, people are not able to make balance while driving. Therefore, owing to this is becoming a reason of collapse between two cars.
Despite of reasons, there are several remedies which can easily tackle this issue. First and foremost is authorities should put some restrictions on using more and more private cars. Even, they should also spread awareness among younger about the negative repercussions of using automobile. In addition to this, there should be a car-pooling method. Which play an indispensable role to reduce this problems. A good illustration about that, in Singapore, there should be a mandatory for everyone to follow car- pooling and those who are not obey this law. Government give them strict punishment. Hence these are the best ways to improve the mindset of every individual.
To recapitulate, although in this technological era more and more people are turning to use own vehicle instead of public transport. Which creates uncountable problems. However, this issues can easily solved by effective solutions like car-pooling.
- More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause and suggest at least one possible solution 84
- some people think that newspaper are the best media to learn and get information from while others believe that the internet is a better source discuss both views and give your own opinion 69
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Meanwhile,
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: obeyed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30573248408 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80327871186 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617834394904 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2965953122 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224350569646 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631737712724 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666208932822 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151614324339 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344119477317 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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