More and more people wear fashionable clothes. Is this positive or negative development?
Nowadays, it is becoming a trend for some people to wear latest wardrobes and to show case their innovation and sense. Also, as part of globalization youngsters prefer to new fashion clothes to adapt to the society. However, others believe this trend would have a adverse affect to their traditional clothing. In the following passage, I will explain various factors for this change before declaring whether it is a positive or negative development.
At present, more people are migrating to developed countries to experience better living standard. During such relocation they tend to wear latest fashionable clothes to be one among the society, and to gain confidence in their work locations. In addition, it is also considered as a self-esteem factor for many people to follow latest clothed while attending public and private ceremonies. For instance, my friend went to Canada as part of work location transfer, after 5 years I could see a radical change in his clothing style, and he said this change is needed to socialize with this neighbours, friends and colleagues. But some people suggest this transformation would hamper the native clothing style is various ways. Hence, it is believe wearing latest fashionable clothes is a need to gain confidence and to be part of the local community.
Further more, even country will be benefited because of this trend. This would foster nation’s clothing industry in leaps and bounds, could provide direct and indirect jobs opportunities for many youngsters, and has cascading effect to country’s economy. Therefore, it is assumed this change of wearing latest clothes is good for the nation in all aspects.
To sum up, amidst this change could have negative affect on native clothing style, however, considering country’s financial factor and people’s liveability it is always a positive development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: wear the latest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33783783784 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97137549219 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574324324324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3276375396 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.857142857 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259885708705 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914962566058 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514074416968 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155409143984 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258988763028 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.