Undoubtedly, wearing different types of clothes has become common in today's world. Due to globalisation, access to different branding clothes has become more easy. Many people have started accepting and wearing trendy clothes while some say traditional clothes will loose its value. I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages for accepting new trends.
There are a plethora of reasons for individuals wearing stylish clothes. To begin with, wearing different variety of stuffs has made people choosier. Many youths have started changing their lifestyle for wear trendy clothes, as they want to be part of crowd and be up-to-date for maintaining their self-esteem. The current trend has also added innovation in new technology to reduce the wastage of clothes. Furthermore, the individuals have become liberal to wear clothes as per their choice and interest.
Moreover, emerging trend has made advancement and development of the new field called fashion designing. Many institutions and colleges have added this field for passionate youngsters. Additionally, this course has added a new business professional, many designers have become popular and specialised for preparing different occasional wearing clothes world-wide. This has added many jobs for poor people specialised in work of embroidery, tracing etc,. And added a lot of development to society.
However, new trend development has many negative effects. Firstly, every trend has a very short duration. People get exhausted by repeating the same stuff, so they go to purchase new things for a new occassion every time, this has made them more spendthrift and prodigal effecting their budget. Secondly, due to cost saving, material used in preparation of dresses is inappropriate. The stuff gets discolored in 1-2 usages and cannot be recycled, hence it adds to a dead stock and is unusable.
To conclude, variety of fashionable clothes have many benefits, but its disadvantages cannot be ignored. I think, its limitations can be overlooked and changes can be made for giving more benefit to the society.
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5015576324 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97605470744 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545171339564 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3676348737 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0952380952 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04761904762 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263730024481 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748402463414 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524857366449 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14188086441 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395010005921 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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