Brain drain is increasing these days specially in sectors like engineering , doctors and IT . Although ,it is sometime thought that supporting this type of immigration is like robbing the underdeveloped countries . On other side some believe that it is just a normal migration of the skilled worker across the globe. In my opinion , i think developed nations are attracting talented employee from underdeveloped countries to some extent but mostly it is the decided by the individuals who immigrate.
Developed nations are calling skilled workers by offering better salaries , facilities and environment . People get mesmerized by all these perks and move to other countries for employment as everyone looks for a better opportunities.But poor countries who has trained these people in their fields and thought that they will be benefiting them in future for developing their country at last feel like robbed by developed nations as their talent move to their nation and start working there and contribute in there economic growth.
On the other side , it is natural tendency of humans to get attracted to more rewarding jobs and better work environment which they do not get in their native country which is poor or still struggling to become a developed nation. So it can be said that most of the time it is the choice of the individuals to relocate to developed nations for more satisfying jobs and life. No one can change their decision. This migration cannot be stopped and globalization has opened doors for people to work where ever they like in the world .
I believe making balance between both scenarios is important so that poor countries do not have to bear a great loss as there progress is also necessary . this can be done with the effect of globalization they can send there patients for medical treatment abroad and can invest for outsource there work to poor countries in addition to this can make there setup there in underdeveloped nations which will help that country also and their purpose will also be resolved.This brain drain issue cannot be completely stopped and it will be foolish also to stop it as it is beneficial for globalization also.
In conclusion , by implementing some measures problem of brain drain can be resolved to some extent for poor countries and migration to rich nations of skilled labour is a natural phenomena which cannot be stopped completely and also not a good thought also
- The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. 56
- More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poo 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03473945409 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84759763125 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468982630273 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.755070213 49.4020404114 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.076923077 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16913957696 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625305972741 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397464185907 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104570455154 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240123029936 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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