There is no doubt that these days significance of transfer from needed countries to good life in wealthy and their needed becoming a very required.
however, the question; are this transfer are affecting on the developing countries? is considered one of the most controversial issues.
today in this essay, i'm going to examine this phenomenon from both viewpoints
one one side of the argument, there are people who argue that the benefits of moving considerably outweigh the disadvantage. the main reason for believing this is having chance for searching about job especially for some vacancies in companies and factories and hospitals where it find more in the wealthy places
moreover, it is also possible to say that circumstances are more better that from the needed countries as education and healthy, children can find places to get and educate useful information by good way and can find bed to get healthy care
one good illustration of this countries which attract more from indigent countries is AUSTRALIA, it attract more people from engineering and doctors and more people who has qualification and they find different life style for the better
on the other hand, it is also possible to consider it with opposing case. it is often argued that in fact this moving erode the quality of services and reduces the number of vacancies
People often have this opinion because wherever as such these number of people in specific region; are competes with the origin people in all service are been introduced to them
a second point is that local people has their traditional and found that more people are coming from different poor countries with a different behavior which affect their children
a particularly good example her is GERMANY
as we have seen, there are no easy answer to this question. on balance, however i tend to believe that the transfer and immigrate to wealthy places is very important as the people don't live twice so getting good life equal getting better condition in economic and healthy and education
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, so, in fact, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10650887574 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65354104306 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 248.777418753 49.4020404114 504% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 246.571428571 106.682146367 231% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.2857142857 20.7667163134 233% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262340792012 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1005303811 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753930787728 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979507158234 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798197602847 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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