It is often believed by some that getting many degrees will apparently help them to move-up in their career ladder and so there is a mad rush towards getting multiple degrees even before finding a right job which is not a welcoming act. In my opinion, I agree that running behind many education qualification will lead to countless social problems.
One good reason to advise professionals to limit their theoretical mastery in colleges is that it will affect their personal life progress badly. This is because, people who spend their valuable young adulthood into pursuing degrees will obviously delay their career and also their marriage life. For instance, recent studies, most of IT professionals in India reported that pursuing higher education is the primary reason for delaying their wedlock as they might not find right time to do it in the later half. As a result of this late marriage ceremony, people may face impotence problems due to lack of hormone stipulation which will badly affect their peace of mind and will lead to other issues. Hence it is advisable to get one degree and move ahead in other part of life timely .
Another valid point to recommend restriction for higher studies is that there will be only few opportunities for higher positions in job market. This is because, as per the organizational tree structure ,every company will have larger demand low level workforce and limited seats for management team. It is certainly true that people with multiple graduation will not appear for low level jobs. Hence this will trigger a tough situation in which right workforce may not be available in the job market. As a result of this, few people will be immigrating to other countries and also local organization will also start to outsource the jobs which will result in poor economy growth for the nation.
In conclusion, in my opinion, spending massive time in pursuing degrees will lead to late marriage and poor economy, hence i suggest to concentrate in other aspect of our life.
- As more and more students enter universities, academic qualifications are becoming devalued. To get ahead in many professions, more than one degree is now required and in future it is likely that people will take a number of degree courses before even sta 56
- nowadays men’s sports are given far more attention by the society compared to women’s sports. What are the reasons for that? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, hence, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97337278107 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63039188222 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53550295858 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 240.20367515 49.4020404114 486% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 280.166666667 106.682146367 263% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.3333333333 20.7667163134 271% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139242977452 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814901649661 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412676392732 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960928511057 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491469854718 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.1 13.0946893788 230% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.64 50.2224549098 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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