More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list.
What are the reasons for this?
What can be done to solve the problem?
It has been reported recently that the number of endangered animal species or those under the risk of extinction is increasing every year. It is believed that one of the main reasons for this tendency is the global warming. This issue can be overcome if people start acting more consciously towards the environment.
The constantly growing number of endangered wildlife representatives is thought to be caused by the global warming. For thousands of years the Earth’s fauna would continue its existence and development under certain weather conditions: some species have adapted to hot and dry weather, while others prefer mild and humid climate. Consequently, any change in the average temperatures or air humidity can potentially jeopardy the comfort or even the existence of wild animals. A recent article published by National Geographic illustrates it how the change in the temperature by two Celsius degrees can threaten the existence of hundreds of wild species.
In order to solve the above-mentioned issue some experts suggest people to behave more environmentally friendly. Climate change is considered to mainly take place due to air pollution, as a result of human activity. From this perspective, a limitation in burnt fossil fuel and other pollutants can result in maintaining current climate conditions and enabling animals vulnerable to weather changes survive. As reported by the United Nations in August 2018, pollution of the environment by the population is the main reason of the temperature increase.
To conclude, an overwhelming number of species has been noticed to either die out or become endangered because of volatile weather conditions on the Earth. One of the effective methods to tackle this issue can be people taking steps towards a more sustainable life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40425531915 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04606420112 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59219858156 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6659185128 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.230769231 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237029730941 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788716214006 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507030606529 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146774941197 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558513406907 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.