Technology has revolutionized the entertainment industry. Affordable mobile phones with a high-speed internet connection have resulted in this sudden growth spurt. Moreover, watching television has been one of the favorite ways to spend time. Both the availability and liking for television has will further boost this positive trend. Excess of everything is bad so does the excess movie watching.
A Few decades back, in a country like India, the ratio was one television to ten households and broadcast was limited to 6 hours a day on a single channel. According to a recent survey by the Industrial body, it has climbed up to 1 per household. Forget televisions; everyone has a multimedia telephone. Also, there are numerous channels with 24*7 broadcast. Of late, many mobile applications like Amazon prime and Netflix provide latest movies with variety of genres, which enables people to watch their favorite films easily. Thus, the availability of content and ease of access is the primary reason. The second reason is the status symbol. It means, among the millennial watching the number of sitcoms or movies has become the criteria to judge a person.
Indeed, it is a wrong habit. Children are prone to addiction. This ultimately negatively impact their academic performance. Furthermore, health issues come along. A recent article in the major New York daily stated that 8 out of 10 American children are suffering from obesity. The article also blamed the television for the same.
To conclude, affordable access to the most-loved time pass has caused long hours of movie watching. In other words, it is a derivative of the technological revolution; however, it has resulted in worse than good. The only beneficiaries to this movie production houses and processed food manufacturers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, moreover, second, so, thus, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26436781609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02442797966 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647509578544 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1152968264 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4285714286 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4285714286 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132463459095 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295180567236 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444429819149 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726900904364 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462412610976 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.34 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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