Most children want to watch the same TV programs and play the same computer games like their friends do. Should parents allow them to do like this ?
Most children want to watch the same TV programs and play the same computer games like their friends do. Should parents allow them to do like this ?
it remained the topic of research for long time for psychologist,dealing with studies of child development, whether parents should allow their children to imitate the TV programs for entertainment purpose or not .I completely stand against parents should permit to do so .
Many of the TV programs contain obscene and violence which is detrimental for them. Since it is not important that what other children watch is always fruitful, parents should choose such type of programs for their blooming birds which are not only significant for cognitive thinking but also full of entertainment. When children try to copy the companions, they are more likely to pick up bad things with good ones.
Moreover, computer games are imperative, nowadays, for children to enhance your mental ability. However, it is not true that each and every game enhance their skills. some games, for example Sniper Elite, contains too much criminality which turn children to aggressive and Immoral. If their peers play these kinds of games, parents have to motivate their children to play brainy games to prevent them to lead a wrong path.
parents should restrict their children to copy in gaming and media programs before they go astray. If they do not do so, they will make excuse on each little thing as they are expected to say they are copying their mates.
In conclusion, parents should have tight vigil on their children what they are watching and playing, and had better do some research to find out best programs on entertainment sources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0394265233 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63021827048 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5909043055 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.153846154 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.51605903522 0.244688304435 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206753767414 0.084324248473 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.208799263594 0.0667982634062 313% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317490990658 0.151304729494 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.305441945695 0.056905535591 537% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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