Most people accept that we now live in a globalized world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extend is globalization a positive or negative development?
Nowadays we, human beings, live in a contemporary era, which has made us a part of a global village. Few citizens have accepted that we are living in a global world that is extremely beneficial, whereas the remaining are against it. I, personally, would say that globalization has impacted positively such as education, business, and help from other nations compared to the downside of it. I shall discuss this in detail in the coming paragraphs.
Firstly, in this highly competitive situation, global education made it easier for all the students to learn whatever they are interested in at any corner of the world. Additionally, many colleges and universities are accepting international students for many courses. Because of global education, many students can get a well-paid job in their own country by studying in a college/university from another nation. The reason behind increasing international students is that many parents are agreed that we all are living in global village. For a instance, due to this pandamic, many foriegn students could learn from their home country on their computer and also get degree certificate from the institution.
Secondaly, the change in the relationship between countries has widely open their door for the investors to start their business and help both countries by it. Hosting company would acquire a golden opportunity to expand their business in the foreign country, while the other country would benefited in their economy and also proliferate the employment rate. If there is any are has been damaged by natural distaster of any country, then remaining world would help the affected country without any hasitation. Some extremely serious decisions could be taken at global level, such as use of nuclear weapons.
To wrap up, after the world war 2, world has changed a lot in the betterment of humans and this is one of the prime reason for the globalization of the world. Now people are relaxed to travel at anywhere they want without any fear or stress. The drawbacks outweigh the advantages of the worldwide integration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e all are living in global village. For a instance, due to this pandamic, many fo...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
... country, while the other country would benefited in their economy and also proliferate t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, so, then, well, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16568047337 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92726026025 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547337278107 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5995580783 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228939384731 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786390862988 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690642257907 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150379652907 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799292144828 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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