most of the people move one place to another for their study or work. Do you agree that this thing has more disadvanges than advantages?
In the salad days of millennium myriad of the masses migrate different cities or country for their work and education. Yes, I believe that cons are outweight the pros. which I scrutinize in the successive fragments.
To begin with, a number of reasons claim that to move one town or nation to another has many disadvanges. The predominant one is that if anyone live without family then he/she face amples of difficulties like he/she may be face homesickness, This has deterimental effect on his/her health. The another reason is that students may indulge in bad companies and start taking drugs because they do not have fear of his/her parents. Moreover, live alone is directly effects their behavior. They may not talking properly with parents.
Nodout, there are also some advantages to live far from house. firstly, most of people help to live alone because of some families problem and distractions so move to another city or country is boon for them. Secondly, they meet various types of people who has differnt experience and culture so they learn a lot of things from them. This thing can help in futur, when they start their bussiness.
In conclusion, although to live far from home give many benefits.However, from my perspective this thing has more negative impacts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...lieve that cons are outweight the pros. which I scrutinize in the successive fragment...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'faces'.
Suggestion: faces
... anyone live without family then he/she face amples of difficulties like he/she may ...
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Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...some advantages to live far from house. firstly, most of people help to live alone beca...
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Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ntages to live far from house. firstly, most of people help to live alone because of some fami...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'families'' or 'family's'?
Suggestion: families'; family's
...ople help to live alone because of some families problem and distractions so move to ano...
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Line 11, column 66, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...o live far from home give many benefits.However, from my perspective this thing has mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19158878505 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10474547958 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640186915888 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.343003707 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.1 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205371175951 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715131642006 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460578885638 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108364656607 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371666682367 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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