There are lots of people who watch movies or TV program in their free time. They watch crime films and criminal TV program because they are entertained when they watch it. In this essay, I will discuss why they enjoy this viewing this kind of movies and the disadvantages of it.
Firstly, the people who make these movies (Script writers/Fiction writers)attract people by writing exciting text, sequence of events, and great photo quality. Some of them are real stories so, some people will watch them to learn how to defend themselves.Criminal movies are blockbusters nowadays as compered with/ to other kinds of movies.
In addition, in my opinion, some people like this type of films because of what they see in their daily lives. Nowadays, we see that their are lots of problems between countries. Every country wants to dominate the other.For example, the American Hollywood, which is the top-notch film industry in the world will do everything possible to remain the envy of all box office images. So I think that people tend to watch this type of movies as a catharsis and comical relief to move away from real-life thinking.
However, these types of movies are harmful to human life especially children because they do not know if this is a good thing or not. Some children get affected quickly and have no personality, so they imitate anything they like. We see now a lot of crimes because this is the first reason for this.
Furthermore, lack of confidence in a person's life because of self doubt may also affect everything in hid life. Studies has shown that the number of divorces has increased over time and one of the reasons was the lack of confidence resulting from watching these films.
In conclusion, i think people who make the film must be discourage from churning this kind of films and start to make films like comedy to change our feeling when we watch it. secondly, the government and family must censor criminal and horror movies and encourage them to watch educational, documentaries, features, informative ,news and comedy films.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...al, documentaries, features, informative ,news and comedy films.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88857142857 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68122573249 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551428571429 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6724110624 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.9375 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300739371914 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101256723967 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716297286117 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153663805879 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849966195292 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...s or TV program in their free time. They watch crime films and criminal TV progra...
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Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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.... In this essay, I will discuss why they enjoy this viewing this kind of movies ...
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...ill discuss why they enjoy this viewing this kind of movies and the disadvantage...
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Suggestion: Criminal
... them to learn how to defend themselves.Criminal movies are blockbusters nowadays as com...
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...heir daily lives. Nowadays, we see that their are lots of problems between countries....
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...ery country wants to dominate the other.For example, the American Hollywood, which ...
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...h this type of movies as a catharsis and comical relief to move away from real-li...
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...ple who make the film must be discourage from churning this kind of films and s...
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...e film must be discourage from churning this kind of films and start to make fi...
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... discourage from churning this kind of films and start to make films like comed...
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Suggestion: ,
...al, documentaries, features, informative ,news and comedy films.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88857142857 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68122573249 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551428571429 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6724110624 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.9375 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300739371914 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101256723967 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716297286117 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153663805879 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849966195292 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.