Undoubtedly, job satisfaction is considered as a vital component of every personal life. More importantly, it certainly takes a great deal of time in our daily lives; thereby, this influences on our well-being enormously. If people are content with their salary and feel safe at work, then they feel content with their lives. However, I am concerned that it is impossible to maintain it for every person.
One source for job satisfaction is presumably the salary as it plays a crucial role in the personal well-being of people and it defines a level of prosperity of every family. This dictates what family members can afford to buy, and if there are sufficient goods or life conditions. If a worker is capable to possess a luxurious house or superior service bought for the wages he has earned, he would feel satisfied with the life he has, therefore, feel appreciated at workplace. Nevertheless, there is a scarce number of positions available which are highly paid. For instance, many positions such as cleaners or gardeners, who perform manual labour, do not provide high wages. Thus, it is unrealistic to expect high salaries for every worker.
Another factor which has a significant impact on job satisfaction is safety of people at workplaces. If only did people endanger their health, they would feel stressed. Moreover, when workers perform tasks that put strain on their wellbeing, not only the workers, but their relatives undergo stress as well. For example, as long as firefighters and police officers serve in dangerous areas, they experience threat which affects their overall contentment. Hence, it is obvious being happy with the job is not possible achieve for everybody.
In conclusion, the main factors of job satisfaction for individual prosperity are salary and safety at work. Furthermore, I am completely convinced that job satisfaction could not be an accessible condition for all citizens. In this way, people should consider this fact and choose their jobs wisely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18209876543 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89569177645 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58950617284 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9940471128 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2777777778 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353837127132 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11133430432 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978263199258 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233957851752 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951620385754 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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