Nowadays there are many talent or gifted children. While somebody think that any child can become a sportsman or musician, others suppose that just some of us are born with certain talents live music or sport.
On the other one hard, it is believed that some people are more talented than others. For example, my cousin is a really good gymnast. She was in 12-13 different countries and always took the medal or prize. That’s why some people can really born more talented than others.
On the other hand, all of us can train every day to achieve success. For example, my classmates played football with me from the childhood. That’s why now we are really powerful team.
In conclusion, talents always play a key role in our success, but hard work is also required, we can make all that we want.
- The graph below shows the average monthly use of health club in Miami and Florida by all full-time members over last year. The pie charts show the age profile of male and female members. 84
- Some people think that the news media nowadays have influenced people s lives in negative ways Others disagree and say that they have been more positive Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Better driver education for better driving habits is more effective than heavier punishments for driving offenses To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transportation in UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981 1991 and 2001 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun talent seems to be countable; consider using: 'many talents'.
Suggestion: many talents
Nowadays there are many talent or gifted children. While somebody thin...
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Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...lent or gifted children. While somebody think that any child can become a sportsman o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 41.998997996 26% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 668.0 1615.20841683 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 142.0 315.596192385 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70422535211 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35927054583 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676056338028 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 506.74238477 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6267750461 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.8 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178750159668 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645647059259 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049944758449 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104204693867 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02913413108 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 78.4519038076 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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