The sense of fulfillment is the most motivatiing feeling which people desire to have whtever they do. Although it is thought that youngsters can satisfy the life more than their elder counterparts, I totally disagree with this statement because the feel of enjoy does not depend on age. The wisdom and the sense of humour are the necessary things to be contented in reality.
To begin with, the wisdom that people acquire if they have a wide range of life experience can lead to a deep understanding of life concept. Those who experienced different situations or met individuals who motivated them to do something can find cheerful explanations from their background and stay reistant to sorrow while those who have never faced specific hardships can feel despair or frustration. Moreover, the wise attitude to a life can be met both in young and older people.
Second, people who can laugh even on their own troubles also can cope with their mood. The ability to create the fun from the serious things should be relevant to the situation and ethically right. Additionally, it helps people remain mentally and phisically strong to stick to their guns and continue their activity. For example, failure in exams should be estimated as a lesson to learn more not to give up. If people are able to laugh on their low marks they can be relaxed and see the core of their mistakes to fix them out.
To conclude, the life satisfaction is feeling which everybody can feel independently on the age. If people have enough amount of
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...body can feel independently on the age. If people have enough amount of
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 262.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83969465649 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65214174506 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576335877863 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1197445075 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5384615385 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257751862323 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906396944908 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634111788337 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155665161191 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369349806743 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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