In modern world, media plays a remarkable role in not just upgrading the general knowledge of common masses but indeed, it also influences their opinion to a great extent. Considering this fact, many people believe that the news must be based on facts. Conversely, others advocate that it should be personalised. In this essay, I will shed some light on the reliability of all the sources of news and also an in depth discussion about the main aim of the newspaper in it.
To embark upon, the utmost goal of any news media is to reveal the truth and to bring out the the reality in front of the public. However, nowadays, no media person is doing justice to this profession. It is no exaggeration to claim that most of the news channels are showing the news that is hugely affected by a slew of factors such as Political pressure, corruption and public demand. In fact, they are more concerned about their TRP rather than telling the actuality. For instance, recently a popular news channel relayed a sensational story about the ruling party which later was quashed by other news channel by presenting the valid evidences. Hence, it would certainly be unwise to trust the content provided by any news media.
Furthermore, the substantial purpose of newspaper is to spread awareness among nation and to uncover the factuality. It is in fact, one of the best sources to fulfil the aforementioned objectives simply because even today majority of people prefer to read a newspaper instead of watching Television or surfing on Internet. The reason behind this vogue is that it is still the most economical, easily accessible and above all the best way to utilise spare time. I can reminisce, even today most of my family members, friends including me choose to read it whenever we are free, to stay updated.
To recapitulate, I would like to quote assertively that journalists must not depraved from their duties because it is not merely a job rather, it is their responsibility to be loyal with people's expectations and with their respectable occupation too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...is to reveal the truth and to bring out the the reality in front of the public. However...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...is to reveal the truth and to bring out the the reality in front of the public. However...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, hence, however, so, still, for instance, in fact, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88034188034 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77744902723 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4268347057 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.2 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237535189367 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701387148077 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369361823228 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117351678788 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512615281577 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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