Most societies has its homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money.
What extent do you agree?
All around the world there are people who live in streets. It is said that the best solution is to give them money. I disagree with this statement, as they can use this money to buy alcohol or drugs. Instead of giving them money, people should give them food or clothes.
In every country lives countless of homeless people who live on streets and beg money from strangers. People think that this is a best way to help them but eventually they use this money to buy drugs or alcohol. Majority of homeless people are dealing with alcoholism and drug addiction which can lead robbery and crimes. For example 60% of Poland homeless people are alcoholics and junkies who also served time in prison.
Instead of giving people without home money, society should give them food or clothes. Most of these people are suffer from hunger and buying them food they can fill their stomach for couple of days. Having a warm meal is better than having another dose of drug. People can also give them clothes or blankets to keep themself warm in cold days. For example in UK one hairdresser give homeless people free hair cuts.
It does not matter where you live, every country have people who live in streets. Instead of giving them money people should give them food or other services, because majority of them are addicted to alcohol and drugs. It is recommended that society should deal more about this problem as this can also decrease crime rate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suffered'.
Suggestion: suffered
...od or clothes. Most of these people are suffer from hunger and buying them food they c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69291338583 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09434017593 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515748031496 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.9370548388 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.5 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 7.06120827912 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347217344616 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13530510985 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105805919945 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242268997096 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229107594038 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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