Nowadays people are working too hard. What is the reason for that? What should employers do in order to prevent employees from this?
It is said that people are focusing on work too much. Main reason for this is low income as people have to work more than one position. Future employers should increase minimum hourly rate and find more solutions how to find better balance between work and home life.
Nowadays it is normal for people to have more than one job. Unfortunately main reason for this is low salary and minimum hourly rate. Humans who does not have higher education or have not graduate high school, struggle more because they do not have skills and experience to find better job with higher salary. They are depending mostly of government bonuses such as maternity leave money. For example in Estonia maternity leave is paid 1,5 years and women are getting pregnant again to get paid maternity leave for another year and a half.
People who have degree, certain skills and previous work experience ,work hard and do extra overtime. Lawyers and doctors are main profession who work harder than other people. This will lead burn-out and stress. Home life is on the edge because they are barley home and miss their childrens achivements. Employers should increase annual leave days in a year in order to avoid to loose good workers. For example Latvia Law Firm Lextal have paid spa weekend with accommodation and food as a Christmas gift for their employees which they can use any time of a year.
In conclusion, nowadays people are working to much and main reason for this is low minimum hourly rate. Employers should increase salaries or find other solution for example add extra annual leave days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople who have degree, certain skills and previous work experience ,work hard and ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ain skills and previous work experience ,work hard and do extra overtime. Lawyers...
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Line 9, column 373, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid loosing'.
Suggestion: avoid loosing
...annual leave days in a year in order to avoid to loose good workers. For example Latvia Law Fi...
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ave days in a year in order to avoid to loose good workers. For example Latvia Law Fi...
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87822878229 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27565506081 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535055350554 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2867470543 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.625 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6875 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26826433732 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972355680506 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692050847086 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191403137041 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520541149244 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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