Most young people without a partner would prefer to have a boyfriend or girlfriend. yet being in a relationship when you are young is not always a good idea. as part of a class project, write about whether you agree or disagree. give reasons for your answer.
Nowadays, many youngsters are getting into romantic relationships but some people argue that this is not a good idea. I completely agree with this because it can create certain issues in their lives.
The most preponderant reason why younger people should not get involved in a romantic relationship / love affair is that it can affect their careers. In other words, while they are in a relationship conflicts are bound to happen and they will increase their stress levels.
As a result, they would not be able to concentrate on their studies or their jobs. For example, a friend of mine got so disturbed because of the regular fights with his girlfriend that he left the job and moved to his native place, and now he is struggling to find employment there. If he had not left the job, he would have received a promotion.
Another reason for not supporting the idea of getting into a relationship at a young age is the risk of unwanted pregnancy. This is because young adults do not care much and mistakes can happen during intimate moments. This can be extremely dangerous. Moreover, if the pregnancy is terminated, it can have detrimental effects on the girl’s health. Also, if they decide to have the baby), it will be a huge financial burden, which can be challenging for some couples. Worse still, they may get ostracized because premarital sex and pregnancy are a taboo in most traditional or orthodox societies.
In conclusion, although youngsters like to be in a relationship, I firmly believe that it should be avoided because it can distract them from their career paths and put them under tremendous pressure. There is also the risk of unwanted pregnancies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91228070175 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81557775888 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571929824561 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6111097868 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15900938494 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535353624898 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383615639833 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826456073309 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312755976637 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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