The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems and what measures can be taken to solve this problem.
There are deter-mental problems when people from rural sector migrate towards big cities for work. Hence this essay the problems of relocation to urban areas and its related solution
Agriculture is a necessity which maintains the ecosystem by providing enough supply of farming commodities to human. The migration of people from countryside to urban areas leaving the farming land produces attrition in the number of farmers which leads to the reduction of farm commodities such as wheat, rice, vegetables and so on. Furthermore, the resettling of people into the urban lands can introduce serious events as they are not acclimatised with the fast paced culture of mega cities. The transition of more people into cities increases the populations, saturation in the jobs which may decline the quality of city life. For example this trend can generate excessive crowd and congestion in city life. Moreover, unfamiliar culture may lead people to engage in crimes and other illegal activities which could affect the balance of law and order.
On the other hand, establishment of cottage and small-scale industries in rural areas encourage regular income apart from agriculture income to the people. To be clear, when rural population generate local income it prevent them to stay back in their respective villages and engage in their traditional occupations. Moreover, in cities the incoming populations need to be settled down in specific areas by providing proper housing and livelihood. The government authorities should start various policies to keep up the quality of city life and promoting a better life who are arriving from rural areas. As a result, this will enable to settle down as soon as possible among incoming population.
Hence, establishment of small-scale industries in rural areas and providing government support to incoming population can overcome this issues considerably.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, apart from, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45608108108 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86645003315 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570945945946 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4184373883 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.230769231 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225086363095 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762946272396 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479959706932 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139330446325 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661013800552 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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