The societies comprised of more than one culture, in which citizens from different ethnicity live are always beneficial for the nation. I am certainly in agreement with the above notion and hold the opinion that a nation flourishes when people from different cultural backgrounds, having proficiency in different domains, contribute to the development of the nation, and live peacefully with people from cultures.
With diverse cultures in a society, people get an opportunity to inculcate good things about other cultures and improve their lives. There are always some unique traditional moral values in a culture that people can learn from their peers. These values not only improve people's lives but also play a vital role in establishing a connection between individuals. Resultingly, people get close to each other by following the traditions of other cultures. In western countries, the United Kingdom, for example, there is a large proportion of Chinese people who play an important role in society by teaching their moral values to the indigenous people, like the significance of using natural products for household chores and using eco-friendly methods of waste disposal.
Secondly, in multicultural societies, people always live with peace and harmony, and they respect other cultures. Moreover, it has been seen that countries with diverse cultures, like India, people from different ethnicities celebrate all the festivals of other cultures too. This helps people to develop a sense of togetherness and they stand United in all the difficult situations, like natural disasters. Consequently, a collaborative effort by people from different cultural backgrounds eradicates all the social problems or threats. For example, in the United States of America, where there are more than 100 cultures, people always stay united and face all the epidemics as a single unit, this helps the country to progress constantly.
Taking all this into consideration, having more than one culture in a society is always beneficial for the nation as it brings people together, and they stand with others in all the uncertainties, apart from this people get to learn a lot of valuable things from other cultures which improve their lives.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...rs in all the uncertainties, apart from this people get to learn a lot of valuable t...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41833810888 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87093434631 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510028653295 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.1537280528 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.461538462 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231962603283 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920962231076 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651964133122 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157341872287 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510478433878 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...rs in all the uncertainties, apart from this people get to learn a lot of valuable t...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41833810888 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87093434631 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510028653295 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.1537280528 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.461538462 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231962603283 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920962231076 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651964133122 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157341872287 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510478433878 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.