Museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, not the local people. Why is this so? What could be done to encourage more local visitors?
Monumental sites are popular among the tourists but not locals. There are a number of reasons for this but certain measures could be taken to mitigate this problem.
There are several causes of this phenomenon. The main one is that most cultures are now dominated by Western influence. People, especially the young, are in danger of losing their cultural identity as they are more interested in popular culture than in their own heritage. In addition, travellers have a strong intention to visit these heritage sites because these buildings are what set the destination countries apart from the ones travellers come from. Hence, that is why these places of interest are more popular among travellers than locals.
Several measures could be taken in order to address the above. To begin with, the government can promote a vibrant art scene by holding festivals, events and competitions related to these historical sites. This will highlight the significance of these buildings, causing people to learn to treasure their past. Another way forward could be for museums to offer a subsidised rate of entry for locals. This will help to reduce the number of locals who are deterred by high entry fees to visit the ancient buildings in their cities.
In conclusion, various factors have contributed to the problem of why locals are not visiting the heritage sites in their own countries, but this situation could be addressed by giving a concession rate to locals and organising art events. Given this situation, it is important for the governing body of Arts and Culture in a country to continually think of ways to engage their people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07777777778 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63361461226 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5013869439 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273604349708 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829905441554 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588171343604 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164247102069 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436468439938 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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