In my countries many people are homeless, Therefore individuals think that the best way to help them is to give money to what extent do you agree?
Undoubtedly, scientist of eminent as well as developing economies have reached to the other planets but still the citizens of such nations are suffering from the menace of rare shelter. A few individuals vocalize that providing financial assistance would be the impeccable option to address the issue. However, I adamantly cogitate that instead of giving easy money, employment opprtunities should be created and provision of public ameneties should be ensured to improve scenario.
Since, financial crisis and other natural clamities are the fundamental root causes which thrust people undesirably to abandon their homes. Thus, the prerequisites requirement is to fulfil the pschological necessties. Therefore, the suppermassy shuold cater the needs of homeless denizens by assuring the provision of government aided shelters such as old age home, orphange, refugee camps and many more. Undeniably, guaranting the ample working platforms to displaced people would eventually make these sufferers efficient to combat with the poverty and endow them with future security. It would be biased to overlook the recent data published by the Australia government during the incident of bushfire more than 3 million of dwellers were allocated to temporary residences rather than donating money as it was the crying need of an hour.
Other plausible measures are to arrange educational facilities and impart practical skills to underprevailged homeless people which would ultimately secure a bright future ahead. Seemingly, this prudent step would certainly euipp them with required knowledge for self-sufficieny and make them work independently to brace their selves financially. Reason to this is that, only monetory grants would turn masses into unproductive assests and they might behave irresponsibly towards their accountabilities and obligations. To exemplify, as per the research by World Health Organisation, Pakistan the underdeveloped nation has almost sold in the hands of America as it has been receiving financial supports from a very long time and have became a handicap country.
To conclude, even though bestowing money is one way to resolve the problem but it is not a long term solution. In order to eradicate this nuisance, entitled resources for the survival natives should be emphasised first by the joint efforts of affulent class of people and authorities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'prerequisites'' or 'prerequisite's'?
Suggestion: prerequisites'; prerequisite's
...rably to abandon their homes. Thus, the prerequisites requirement is to fulfil the pschologic...
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Line 5, column 503, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sponsibly towards their accountabilities and obligations. To exemplify, as per th...
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Line 5, column 736, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...supports from a very long time and have became a handicap country. To conclude, ev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61388888889 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03665746838 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661111111111 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2097154088 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.357142857 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105961893497 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318137881502 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0237160278058 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594622766824 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110114929683 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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