n modern times, families have become exposed to several types of challenges. These challenges are results of the rapid change of technology which has its own impact on society and family.
One of these changes is the ambition of family offspring to lease its house and live an independent live. This ambition is considered to be beneficial but it has its disadvantages.
In the meantime, teenagers have an easy access to a wide range of knowledge through the social media platforms, which have a certain impact in their motivation. According to an article which was published on New York Times Newspaper, more than 30% of teenagers are welling to leave their parents’ house in order to have a free life style and do whatever they like without any supervision.
According to the same article mentioned above only 10% of these youngsters need to live alone for the reason of starting their career and be productive.
Accordingly, the benefit of this kind of development is that we can have young people to be an addition to the working force of the country. This will ease the parents’ life furthermore, they will be an added value to the country economy.
On the other hand, this can result in a growing number of youth crimes which will be caused by the lake of supervision.
At the end, it is required to allow children to develop their mentality as well as earning the enough knowledge to define the correct path to follow.
In modern times, families have become exposed to several types of challenges. These challenges are results of the rapid change of technology which has its own impact on society and family.
One of these changes is the ambition of family offspring to lease its house and live an independent live. This ambition is considered to be beneficial but it has its disadvantages.
In the meantime, teenagers have an easy access to a wide range of knowledge through the social media platforms, which have a certain impact in their motivation. According to an article which was published on New York Times Newspaper, more than 30% of teenagers are welling to leave their parents’ house in order to have a free life style and do whatever they like without any supervision.
According to the same article mentioned above only 10% of these youngsters need to live alone for the reason of starting their career and be productive.
Accordingly, the benefit of this kind of development is that we can have young people to be an addition to the working force of the country. This will ease the parents’ life furthermore, they will be an added value to the country economy.
On the other hand, this can result in a growing number of youth crimes which will be caused by the lake of supervision.
At the end, it is required to allow children to develop their mentality as well as earning the enough knowledge to define the correct path to follow.
- Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or a sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits.Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or problems? 61
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?Has this become positive or negative development? 56
- Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter•explain the reasons for the noise•apologise•describe what action you will take 56
- Youngsters nowadays prefer to live on their own and leave their families. Is this a positive or a negative development? 56
- Many cities around the world have seen an explosion in the number of supermarkets appearing on the high street and out of the town shopping centres This development has led to increased choice for customers ensured prices are kept low and make the shoppin 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...tages. In the meantime, teenagers have an easy access to a wide range of knowledge through th...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... an added value to the country economy. On the other hand, this can result in a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, if, so, well, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82661290323 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76928661591 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588709677419 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.762461332 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.818181818 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336372766894 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146461439956 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189812720966 0.0667982634062 284% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184580640251 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.284462786792 0.056905535591 500% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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