New technologies and ways of buying and selling products are transforming the lives of consumers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
It is often true that recent technologies and type of buying and selling in modern life has an effect on changing the customer’s lives. Personally, I agree with this said notion, and different reasons will be elaborated in this essay.
First and foremost, the new internet technology in terms of online shopping is a salient example for transforming the consumer’s lives; obviously, the power of buying and selling products has been shifted from physical shopping into online shopping, with a significant decline in numbers of buyer and seller in malls and hypermarkets. Substantially, the lifestyle of consumers has been changed into a new luxurious life without exerting tremendous efforts and wasting times on physical shopping. Furthermore, using mobile applications for searching for shops locations and seeking for the most reasonable product’s cost facilitating and simplifying the life of customers by only one click on their mobile phones.
In addition, other technology, help in modifying the client’s lives which is spreading of automated teller and credit card machines, which let the people carrying plastic money instead of real money, thus, the percentage of crime has been sharply decreased after appearances of this technology as per USA police office organization’s report in 1990 which stated that nine out of ten citizens would become safer if they were carrying plastic money, and it is, thus, recommended that carrying only credit cards could safe customers lives.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me firmly that, new technologies in the new era of globalization are the key player in altering the consumer lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46332046332 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15532139881 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644787644788 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.670301485 49.4020404114 295% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.142857143 106.682146367 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171625775961 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824637637837 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457016439638 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101998137246 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487458492884 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.0946893788 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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