In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second-hand clothing amongst younger generations. WHY is this happening? DO you think it’s a positive or negative development?
Recently, the idea of buying used garments has been increasingly adopted by young people. Not only will this essay reveal the reasons behind this trend but it will also discuss why I believe this phenomenon has great positive impacts on both youth and society.
The driving force behind this trend is the decreased financial state of most young people these days. To illustrate, the relation between prices and pocket money of an average young person is inversely proportional as the prices are soaring more with every passing year. That is why purchasing second-hand clothing may offer a salient solution for youngsters to buy whatever they want in a low cost. Moreover, young people now are greatly influenced by TV and social media celebrities; they like to follow their idol’s styles which involve extremely expensive brands. In Egypt for example, a brand new Nike sneaker can cost up to 5000 pounds, while on OLX, a second hand website, it may cost only 900 pounds.
From my perspective, this choice of wearing pre-owned garments has some considerable benefits on youth and society. Firstly, by adopting such a trend, young people are learning how to think practically in order to save more money for a prominent future. Secondly and more importantly, this phenomenon has opened a new gate for trading among countries; hence, it has contributed to lessening the unemployment rate among youth. For instance, one of my friends established her Facebook page for second-hand clothing last year which is now one of the leading pages in this field, and it pours her a high monthly profit, also she has given the opportunity for three more persons to work as moderators with her.
To conclude, the widespread adoption of second-hand clothing could be attributable to young people low income and their desire to follow the latest trends, and it seems to me that this trend is positively affecting youth and society as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.028125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69778374029 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615625 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9498583568 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.083333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15506975438 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552994310198 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391081727415 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10226918739 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169081919151 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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