News stories on Television and in newspapers are usuallly followed by images and some demographics believe it is more efficient than text, while others think otherwise.
On the one hand news and information that is supported with pictorial representation often caughts the attention of the audience. Images are very powerful and are bound to create more awareness than ordinary text. We are also in the era of information explosion and have so much information to process. We get a lot of updates and alerts and cannot possibly read them all but seeing images with the alerts will enable us to filter and read only the ones that caught our attention. For example a recent survey in Abuja about the number of people that are likely to watch news or buy newspapers to read. The survey reveals that news or information supported with graphical images have the highest number of viewers and patronage.
Needless to say, textual news can be boring atimes and more often easy to forget the complete detail over a period of time , unlike visuals which are very easy to remember. A research shows that babies as early as 3 months, can recognize his or her family members easily through facial identification which is synonymous to images.
To conclude, some people believe that when news on entertainment media such as TV and newspapers are accompanied with pictures they tend to be productive than just mere text while some people are of different opinion. They believe pictures has no special effect on the efficacy of the news, but I opine, that pictorial representation of news and information is optimum
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95925925926 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72822273703 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1367699621 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.727272727 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248279395636 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858802781114 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677343725789 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142335382561 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562846336915 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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