Now a days more and more people are spending less time at home.
Why do you think this happens? What effect does this have on individuals and society?
People often spend outside the house due to current lifestyle. Recently most of the individuals are investing their time very limitedly in their residential place. This essay will discuss about the reasons for less home staying and the consequences of this on the population and the society.
Most of the people are not spending enough time with the family due to long work hours. Because, there is a huge competition in every profession, people tend to stay long in the offices which reduce his personal time. For instance, although the employee has to be rated on his performance, most of the companies do consider the work hours. Hence, the strong desire for winning towards career is limiting the time they reside in their house.
Furthermore, today’s stressful life is demanding the people to opt for amusement parks that leads to having very less time to spend in the house. While the work life has become so stressful, the individuals are choosing different enjoyment clubs to relieve from the tension leaving no time in their life to home. For example, huge workloads are leading to psychic problems, so to avoid that people frequently visit refreshment areas. Therefore, because of the hectic work schedules, people are preferring to spend most of their time in fun zones leaving no room for the house.
If the individuals are not spending sufficient time in their house the relation between the family members will be very weak leading to losing humanity and ethics which is dangerous to the society. What happens if there is no humanity? While, people with no kindness, doesn’t love anyone except themselves resulting in negative attitudes. A person without ethics can do wrongful acts and crimes. The civilization with unethical humans would suffer from lack of values in day to day life. Henceforth, insufficient time investment in the home leads to inhuman and unethical behavior towards the individuals and the society.
Lengthy hours in the organizations and going to parks are reducing the time spent in the home that is ultimately leading to unkind humans with no values.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 496, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...se of the hectic work schedules, people are preferring to spend most of their time in fun zone...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11560693642 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68847031449 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511560693642 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.223323875 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211255976314 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695198154792 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385167945466 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118779776037 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471063040012 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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