Images tend to be more eye catchy than the words. News articles are often published in paper or media along with the relevant photographs. Few audience think pictures convey more information than words. In this essay I would like to discuss my opinion that info-graphics are informative but words have their own prominence.
Now-a-days all the media and news channels are more relaying upon the photographs. Every day they come up with innovative ideas to attract the audience. One such attempt is usage of the images in news converges. For instance, the adverts and news with images are attractive to the teenagers due to their narrative mode. So, many TV shows and newspapers are using images to cover the news stories.
Because, it takes less time to go through the postures, most of the people feel that they are more effective. While present generation are very busy in their lives, they don’t have much time to know what is happening around them. However, with in the limited time available everyone is interested to read through the newspapers and media, which has become quite easy with the help of related images. For instance, a picture showing the budget in detail is very easy to analyse in fewer seconds compared to big paragraphs. As, the images are time saving, many people feel that they are effective than words.
Although many people feel that words are less important than images, written articles have their own significance in my opinion. Images can not disclose the entire information as it is a small resource. For example, a photo about statistics may not be so detail to understand all the required information. But, content can efficiently deliver the message irrespective of the images. Hence, words convey the content completely while images can do the same in certain instances only.
Therefore, I believe that info-graphics and words have their own significant marks on delivering the news. Though some argue that graphs are more efficient, words are equally important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun audience seems to be countable; consider using: 'Few audiences'.
Suggestion: Few audiences
...ia along with the relevant photographs. Few audience think pictures convey more information ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 965.302439024 175% => OK
No of words: 331.0 196.424390244 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10574018127 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65789608644 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 106.607317073 175% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564954682779 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 283.868780488 192% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 8.94146341463 235% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.803978573 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4761904762 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7619047619 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0499766024094 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.016696632757 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312949318426 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0286873515083 0.15604864568 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287516537587 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 40.7170731707 214% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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