Nowadadys many people are diagnosed with aneroxia ,
What do you think the causes of this are?.
What can be done to improve this situation?
The disease ‘Aneroxia’ has developed its roots on humankind dangerously in recent years. Disordered eating which is commonly seen in today’s generation is the main reason behind this illness and it can be overcame by the regular intake of healthy food.
To set in, Eating disorder is proved to be the main cause of aneroxia. Because people would probably lose weight if they did not eat properly and that results the state of having a low body mass index which is known as aneroxia. To be more specific, low body weight occurs due to improper eating such as skipping meals , unhealthy diet or inheritance towards food. A latest study on modern- day food timings of people in the USA illustrates that a huge paradigm do not follow timely eating.Needless to mention that people have no enough time to concentrate on what they eat or perhaps they forgot such basic needs on the verge of running behind money . Hence many are suffering with diseases like aneroxia which are extremely harmful.
However , Following a strict order in eating would be a solution to this problem. Because eating right is defined as timely intake of food which is nutritious and if that becomes a habit-all eating disorders would get disappeared .To illustrate , researches show that 98 percentage of people who have aneroxia have either done conscious food control to avoid over weight or an unrealised dislike to food. Therefore regular eating will be a perfect remedy for this issue.
To conclude, aneroxia is an alarming state of illness which has to be cured at the earlier stage itself. The healing can be done by having more healthy food on definite time periods because the main reason behind this disease is disordered eating and hence it is mandatory to correct from the root cause.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96333333333 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7122643093 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.2427774568 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.083333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199544110241 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816621767297 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348325877053 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123907423264 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191942451214 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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