Nowadays many women are joining the police and military forces. However some people believe that this jobs are not suitable for women. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the recent years, women have started to join armed forces and police squad which is a unprecedented trend compared to the past. While some people are extremely supportive to the change , the other paradigm believes that such fields are not appropriate for women to work. In my opinion, more women should join police and army forces because it would be the right way for them to prove others that they can fight the odds just like men.
On the one hand, women are still considered as the weak gender by many and it should get changed. Now, the police and military forces are supporting women candidates to enrol the pool more than before because all of such work sectors are getting developed with better facilities by government’s effective interventions. For instance, the Indian army have special women cell in all military units to help women employees on their complaints and difficulties. Hence it is the perfect time for more to get into such gritty fields to show their talent and strength to the world.
On the other hand, military and police jobs are very exhausting in general which will dry out the energy of women very fast. To be specific, police or military activities will not have comfortable atmosphere most of the time because they have to encounter the attacks of enemies and violence situations and some very dangerous circumstances without food or water. For example during the time of war, military candidates will be living in tents or anywhere outside which are not very safe. This demanding conditions would be harder for a woman to work properly.
To conclude, Today’s women are ready to face more challenges on the work front . Even though many people oppose women joining military or police squad, they should do that to prove their strength and abilities which might get noticed more because of the toughness of those fields and needless to say how it would ultimately result in the women empowerment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in general, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92401215805 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59728080863 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528875379939 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4507403868 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.615384615 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284767259847 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106691282862 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491280225577 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181419773797 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370866660502 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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