It can be seen that now children are become a technology friendly due to advancement in technology. They prefer playing on computer as many games are available on computer to play. But this trend will ruin the life of children in many ways. I am going discuss both side of this burning issue.
To begin with, gone are the days when children played outdoor games which helped them to maintain their body. To discuss further, now children utilised their free time playing games in computer which not only affects on their eyesight but also make them very passive or lazy.
Moreover, it can’t be ignored that technology have changed our life in positive way. But on the other hand, negative impact cannot hide.
Furthermore,Outdoor activities such as cricket, football, hockey not only increase their stamina but also make their body in good shape and healthy life style. Parents should teach their children benefits of playing outdoor.
Conclusion, I strongly believe that this passive activities put a negative impact on children because parents are unaware and unable to teach their children in their hectic life. There should be awareness programs by government in school or public places where knowledge of outdoor activities and their benefits should be provided.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun game seems to be countable; consider using: 'many games'.
Suggestion: many games
...ogy. They prefer playing on computer as many game are available on computer to play. But ...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...laying games in computer which not only effect on their eye sight but also make them v...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...computer which not only effect on their eye sight but also make them very passive or lazy...
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Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry passive or lazy. Moreover, it can’t be ignored that technology have changed ...
^^
Line 6, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Outdoor
...tive impact cannot hide. Furthermore,Outdoor activities such as cricket, football, h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14423076923 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55964355877 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605769230769 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3972435531 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184429807769 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761882172425 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582346590189 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102600118877 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565466386789 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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