Nowadays the crime rate is increasing, especially among teenagers.
What are the reasons behind it?
How can we reverse this trend?
What punishment methods should we used?
In recent time, the number of unlawful acts are incessantly augmenting esspecially juvenile delinquency. There are ample of reasons behind this trend like poor educational standard, violence at the home as well as peer pressure can be taken into account. Although, these can be resolved by appropriate education and parents-children interaction training programs and on top of that teenagers should be punished by isolating them from parents or by strict house arrest.
The primary reason behind this issue is that lack of proper education that teenagers are not being inculcated nowadays which makes them illiterate. The secondary reason is the frequently occurring conflicts and violent behavior in family because teenagers will utterly imitate them. For example, instead of gaining stringent knowledge, my friend has been greatly influenced by his family negatively and gradually started committing crimes. Another reason is that if the social circle is not good enough then juveniles would be astrayed to do wrongful act. So, these all can be reasons behind this scenario.
However, this trend can be reverted by taking various actions through multiple ways. Firstly, education, not only related to consequences of crime but also about the prevention of felony should be included in the curriculum. Secondly, every school should organize the recreational activities which will attract the students and make good impression on their minds. To illustrate, every school in the USA are compelled to include various extra-curricular activities after school hours to make students relaxed and stress free. Thirdly, parents-children interaction programs should be run by government because it would help parents to learn how to nurture their children effectively. Thus, these are the actions that can be taken to stop juvenile crime.
Moreover, the best way to punish children is to isolate them from parent and force them to reside with other people. In addition to that, house arrest can be the another punishment as it would exempt the teenagers from outer world. Furthermore, nowadays the concept of juvenile hall is gaining ground that features like adult jail, but convenient to teenagers. Additionally, to some extent, penalties and fines can solve the issue only if the crime done by children is minor. Hence, instead of giving harsh punishments ,I believe that, these type of friendly actions can resolve the matter quickly.
In conclusion, low level of education, unacceptable family atmosphere and surrounding people are the cardinal reasons behind this issue. Though, it can be changed by precise education and effective programs related to parents and children. Additionally, in my opinion, isolation either from family or from society is the best punishments and it is recommended that every government should confronted to resolve this perilous eventuality.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-01-23 | sukhjit singh1984 | 56 | view |
| 2020-09-15 | Ronald88 | 70 | view |
- The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicines. Government funding should reflect this.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Being a celebration such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits.What are the problems and what are the possible solutions. 11
- Many people support use of animals for testing medicines for humans Others believe it isn t appropriate to use animals for such experiments Discuss both views and give your own opinion 82
- Being a celebrity can bring many benefits and problems.What are the problems and what solutions can be taken?? 73
- Some think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe that one can get any information or advice from the internet or books.Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 584, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'run'?
Suggestion: run
...children interaction programs should be run by government because it would help par...
^^^
Line 7, column 519, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nce, instead of giving harsh punishments ,I believe that, these type of friendly a...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2439.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 443.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50564334086 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89793987714 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553047404063 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 756.0 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4195025404 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.863636364 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1363636364 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173593077398 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560344924267 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394481430337 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105792494052 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00636421172844 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.