Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this. Explain the reason for this and discuss any possible effects it may have no society.
In recent years, it has been observed that family members have become less close with each other than it was in the last decade, owing to numerous reasons. In the following paragraphs, My aim in this essay would be to discuss vital reasons and further highlight its effects on the community.
Firstly, we are living in a consumerist society, people are working more and more to fulfill their desires. They have become so workaholics that they have no time for family. In addition, most parents in third world countries, nowadays, are sending their children abroad for higher education. It has proved from a survey that almost 40% of youngsters from developing countries are completing their tertiary education from renowned institutes of the developed world. So this kind of distance barrier has further been instrumental in creating rifts between parents and children. Secondly , technological craze has taken over the society. In the current era people have ben addicted to social media and fake internet friends, that they have forgotten the importance of a true family. Most people prefer to chat than to have a face to face quality interaction with siblings or parents. For instance, Facebook is the world’s most popular online social network and used by more than one billion people. so with the continuing trend it seems to take away the precious bonding time between the parent and the child.
The above mentioned reasons have a number of detrimental effects on the community. At first, it has weakened the bond between parents and children, thus involving a lot number of teenagers to taking up to drug addiction out of insecurity, proved by an annual survey conducted by a Control of Drug Addiction Association in a developing country. Secondly, psychiatrists have declared the fact that depression and loneliness, is a dominant issue of today’s world, leading to higher suicidal rate that it was in the last decade.
All of this being said, I believe that family members have fallen apart from each other in the current era, hence the community has to take corrective measure to rebuild its faith in the family institution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, third, thus, apart from, as to, for instance, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09915014164 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72832223531 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57223796034 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4063164893 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286458852442 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830918225574 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608668959798 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157431232059 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448751401574 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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