Nowadays, an increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? what can be done to solve this?
In the cutting edge era, the considerable amount of white-collar workers are migrating to wealthy nations instead of living in their native underdeveloped nations. This essay will explicate problems such as skills shortage and economic development may cease of their own country alongwith some solutions.
To begin with, one of the major problems caused by such brain-drain is that the poor countries may deprived of skilled professionals. In other words, in contemporary era most of doctors and teachers are going to abroad for attaining higher wages and better living standard due to which cities of such nations struggle to get fundamental facilities such as medical and education. For instance, according to recent survey by WHO the mortality rate in underdeveloped nations is high due to chronic diseases such as cancer because of lack of expert doctors. To mitigate it, government should offer better salaries with good incentives as well as better amenties to entice them to live and work in their country.
The another problem caused by this issue; economic instability of poor countries cannot be overlooked. To elaborate it, due to migration of expert workers especially doctors and teachers, developing nations have to rely on foreign technical aid in medical as well as education field which costs them billions of dollars and hence destablize the economy of that nation. To epitome, India has faced economic crisis as its annual budget declined from 7% to 5% due to emigration of skilled workers. To cope with this, legal authorities should spend a part of their income on improving living standard of citizens so that people find it workwhile to live in their born nations.
To conclude, skilled professionals are leaving their undeveloped countries because of non availability of adequate opportunities and this is leading to shortage of workers and poor economic growth of their motherland and to stop this lawmakers should launch special schemes for educated and aspiring youth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the doctors') or simply say ''most doctors''.
Suggestion: most of the doctors; most doctors
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... growth of their motherland and to stop this lawmakers should launch special schemes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, may, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30503144654 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87051804006 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581761006289 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1835066632 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.363636364 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9090909091 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234564830429 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921185374121 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793578449433 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151201102948 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242367870228 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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