Nowadays, the internet and television have given ordinary people a chance to become famous. Is this a positive or negative development?
It is surprising how ordinary people have become popular with the aid of television and social media. In my opinion, the shear benefits bring the positive outcomes to humanity as a whole, despite the minor misuse by some.
To begin with, the entertainment industry dominated by nepotism and who have money, the less privileged people do not get chance to expose their talent. Due to this reason, internet is blessing for those who are struggling for fame and showcase hidden talents. To illustrate, the teenagers and professionals who are master in their field such as cooking, makeup, software and any other skills want to expose to the public can make the videos and post on the You-tube channel. This in turn helps them to earn money and become star overnight by gaining popularity. Furthermore, television reality shows such as dance India dance and sare gama pa give chance to the skilled and struggling people.
On the other hand, some maniacs can exploit the media and get the fame by negative publicity. The published contents and views can influence many uneducated mentally ill people. For instance, media promotes bad hobbies and characteristics like pornography, terrorism, violence and scandals, it have lethal effect on youngsters and teenagers as they have not developed their own belief and opinion so they easily affected and follow their footsteps. In addition television produces reality programs about individual life to get high rating by cheap publicity.
To summarize, television and social media play incredible role to give platform to people with skills and talent. However they should scrutinize their content before publishing, posting and streaming.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: to people
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...affected and follow their footsteps. In addition television produces reality programs ab...
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Line 9, column 560, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33208955224 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72820143904 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619402985075 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1723779339 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.923076923 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214932564051 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653293492127 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609193525973 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119275879955 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520787782287 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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