These days youngsters replace the olders by taking leading positions at workplace.According to me it has more benefits and very few negtive points, before coming to conclusion I will through light on both aspects and will justify my opinion in my forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, most dominent reason is the adolscents persue their study in latest education system, thus they have broaden knowledge about morden technology used in firms. Moreover, second strong cause behind it is companies need enthusiastic people for the higher post like manager because their job is like keep eye here and there, so their need is to higher mentally and physically fit person, youngsters are more capable for this duty. Additionally, because of physical strength they can work for long hours which is essential factor to provide better productivity to organization.
On the contrary side, there are some drawbacks also. Most prominent disadvantage of this is newcomers are not experienced as older ones however, they have lead in communication but they are not go throw out the critical circumstances like downfall in shares so they cannot handle these kind of situation appropriately.
After pondering over a great deals and delebration with myself I would like to conclude that youngsters are more suitable towards organization because of their attitude and this leads to postive development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39269406393 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01517882565 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707762557078 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2552135186 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.714285714 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2857142857 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0595643199585 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0238787639578 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0188793338332 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0292629950724 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248902469644 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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