Nowadays in many countries woman have full time jobs. therefore, it is logical to share household task evenly between man and woman. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.
In the last few decades, with the increase in cost of living, it has become unmanageable for the male member of the family to make the ends meet single-handedly. Therefore, to cope up with this situation, women in most of the countries have stepped in to contribute towards the household expenses, by taking full time jobs. As women, cannot administer both office and home work alone, I completely believe that the domestic work should be equally distributed among both the sexes. In my below essay, I will elucidate my view with examples.
Although, it is assumed that the woman of the family has a superior command over the household chores, there are certain works which require more manual intervention. If these home-tasks are assigned to men, it leaves the female of the family with more time to unwind herself after the long working hours. For example, activities such as laundry and vacuuming, can be easily taken up by the men as it requires more physical strength and women can take up cooking and dish-cleaning activities. If these errands are evenly distributed, it would lead to a less stressful atmosphere at home.
Furthermore, due to even distribution of work, both the parents can devote ample time in the upbringing of their children. As parents’ involvement plays a vital role in a child’s growth, it is crucial that both the members spend adequate time with them. To illustrate, on the one hand, mothers can concentrate more on the academic growth of their children, whereas fathers can focus on more of their physical activities. If an equilibrium is established and both office and domestic work is bifurcated among both the parents, the child gets enough time to spend with both the parents and eventually grow up into a successful human being.
In conclusion, I completely accord with the thought that men and women should share domestic work equally, as it gives more time to the women to relax and both the parents can focus equally on their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...wards the household expenses, by taking full time jobs. As women, cannot administer both ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98805970149 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81421462672 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546268656716 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.5069681182 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.538461538 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127591951581 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504035099204 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547084233549 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796671219442 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279924273288 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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