In today's contemporary era, with changing life styles, the roles of family members are changing. Owing to the hectic schedules of young couples, their children are mostly looked after by the older members of the family. Even though it seems quite positive at present, in my belief this would have numbers of harmful effects in the longer run for the aged people as they may face problems with their health at this age.
To begin with, even though it seems quite relaxing trend for working couples, it is practically difficult for senior people due to their poor health at this age. For instance, taking care of children requires lot of energy and agility itself, whereas old age people are usually found lacking stamina or suffering with lot of other age-related problems. Hence, giving them burden of children’s care will surely put them in trouble.
However, on the other side, such a trend can give an unspoken happiness to older people when they play with their children’s children. In my culture, majority of senior people have a common dream of playing with their grand-children, because that gives them immense pleasure. Moreover, sometimes, when youngsters go to work, their parents feel lonely and bore at home and are not lefty with any other better options to kill their time but spending time with kids, instead by taking the accountability of the kids they themselves feel happy as they can somehow help their over hectic children. But on the whole, this responsibility is good till they can really enjoy it and it must not be thrusted upon the old people just because they are idle at home.
- People recognize a difference between children and adults. What events (Experiences or ceremonies) make a person an adult? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer. 100
- Nowadays in many families the grandparents are responsible for bringing up children Is it a good or bad development for grandparents Give your own opinion and examples 44
- Nowadays in many families the grandparents are responsible for bringing up children Is it a good or bad development for grandparents Give your own opinion and examples 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...free from any of such responsibilities. However, on the other side, such a trend...
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Suggestion:
... competent enough for the latest world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, whereas, for instance, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9068627451 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67219366676 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522058823529 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.2883254024 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3846153846 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129130536165 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517563587557 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346794232147 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821867888461 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036805356952 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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