Althoug illiteracy sounds like something linked to a far past, many people still these days are illiterate. Not being able to read and write has a detrimental impact on everyday life, condemning those people to a life made of isolation, poverty and misery. The roots of this problem - which is more devastating in developed countries - grow in terrains poisoned with crime, violence lack of opportunities and absence of social infrastructures. Mostly affected by this plague are children coming from disadvantaged families: sometimes the parents are unemployed or come themselves from a backround of poverty; in some cases, parents are not there at all and children have to look for themselves without having the opportunity to attend school. Rare but not uncommon is the case of adults who are not able to read and write also in their mature age. In a society where being literate is considered a basic requirment to have any sort of job, this situation can be an obstacle too huge overcome.
Governments should tackle this problem by essentially spending more money on the educational system and tryning to make it more efficient and closest to the community as much as they can. Resources should be invested in afert school programs which can allow people withoout education to improve themeseves or to help immigrants learn the language of the country they are currently living. Hiring the best teachers and rewarding them according to their perfomances should also taken into account in order to enhance the overall quality of the education system.
To sum up, if it true that actions should be taken by governments by subsidizing the educational system, steps should also taken by individuals themselves who have to face a problem that can have negative consequences on their life.
- Anyone can post information on the internet Some people say most of what we read on the Internet is inaccurate To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Scientists tell us that some activities are good for health and others are bad Despite knowing that millions of people continue doing unhealthy activities What are the causes and what are the solutions for this 84
- Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness Do you think people can be happy without much money what other factors contribute towards happiness 56
- Some people think that if a country is already rich any addition in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or e 78
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, sort of, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10921501706 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85178041527 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617747440273 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3986461928 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.7 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164089806693 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634869756066 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355929830881 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105017685055 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269554363817 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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