Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home.Why do you think it happens?What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?
With the increase in technology and amenities in the community and people becoming more involved, most people prefer to eat restaurant food and have no desire to cook at home.I will state the reasons and the disadvantages of this in the following paragraphs.
Human life has changed a lot over time, as has the effect on how they prepare their food.People spend a lot of time working and don't have enough time to cook. As a result, ordering food is a good choice for busy people.Because the cooking process is very long, like cooking a chicken, which involves cleaning and slicing and cooking it is a multi-hour process.And also to do this we have to use electrical appliances and water so that a lot of electricity and water is also consumed in the cooking process.
Delivering cooking to restaurants has many disadvantages for people. First, people are unaware of the ingredients used, and as the number of consumers increases, more consumables are needed. Most restaurants may use inferior ingredients and use fragrant chemicals to eliminate the stench of food.They also use abnormal flavors that affect people's health.Secondly, when people use ready meals, they have no knowledge of how to cook, and in times of need they cannot make their own meals. Especially when we do not have access to a restaurant.
In conclusion,I believe that ready meals are a good opportunity for those involved in the job. But these foods can have a devastating effect on people's health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99193548387 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93504073224 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568548387097 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.112593373 49.4020404114 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.555555556 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197817664193 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084082152681 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448711161028 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123530162739 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285285945682 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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