Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home.Why do you think it happens?What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?
It is a very popular practice in the modern society to order ready-made food from restaurants, rather than cooking at home.The main reasons for such a tendency may be cheap prices in some restaurants and people’s desire to save some time from cooking.Even though ordering food have some obvious advantages, its disadvantages should not be underestimated.
On the one hand, ordering prepared food may be the best choice for a busy person, who does not have time for cooking and cleaning.Cooking food at home requires a considerable amount of time, moreover the cleaning process may take even more time and resources than cooking itself.For example, cooking a simple dish such as chicken with rice and home requires significant amounts of water and electricity for electrical appliances such as the oven and dishwasher.Hence, having an opportunity to order food from a restaurant will save a lot of time, electricity and water.
On the other hand, delegating the process of cooking to some restaurant have a dramatic disadvantage of not having the information about the ingredients used in the meals.With high demand, grow the volumes of required products, which sometimes can affect the quality of purchased produce.For example, it is a very common practice in some restaurants to make salads from products that are about to go bad and mask the rotten scent by adding some chemicals and spices.Hence, some restaurants may use poor quality products or chemicals for boosting taste and preservatives, which may have a negative effect on the customer’s health in the long run.
In conclusion, ordering food from restaurants may be a tempting choice for people who have no time for cooking at home, but this approach has a critical disadvantage of being not informed about the ingredients used in the meal, which can have destructive consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42123287671 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41393355191 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554794520548 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 20.2975951904 360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.604940089 49.4020404114 313% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 395.75 106.682146367 371% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.0 20.7667163134 352% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.25 7.06120827912 315% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157473313487 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116741855908 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055988326735 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116741855908 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055988326735 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.6 13.0946893788 310% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.08 50.2224549098 -22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.9 11.3001002004 291% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.34 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.2 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.2 10.1190380762 308% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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