Nowadays many people choose readymade food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?
With busy routine, people today are finding very little time to cook healthy food, often ignoring their health and opting for ready-to-eat items, to save some cooking time. This essay will discuss the reasons for this change in eating habits and evaluate both the advantages and disadvantages.
To begin with, people today are living a busy life with both genders of the house working to fulfill the personal and professional needs. This constant chase leaves very little time for individuals to look after their kitchen and dietary needs. However, this new age problem has found a solution in readymade food items that have flooded the market in recent years. Available in all flavors and packaging, these items offer to save time and satisfy the taste buds. They have successfully established themselves as an alternative to traditional dishes and help saves long cooking hours, saving time for self-rejuvenation.
However, these ready to eat items have a negative impact on health and increasing health problems are testimony to this. Loaded with preservatives and added colors, eating these foods on regular basis has proved detrimental to health. Moreover, the packaged food is low on proteins and vitamins, and have more than required quantity of carbohydrates and unhealthy fats. In addition to these, several studies have successfully established their role in increased cases of cancers and several other life-threatening diseases. One such instance, is the complete ban on the sales of Maggie noodles in India, after a lab experiment found lead in the noodles. The Maggie, it was found, though famous among young and old, was badly affecting their immune system and was acting like a slow poison.
To conclude, I would suggest that people should pay more attention to their health and curb their reliance on readymade items. The adage ‘Health is wealth’ should act as a motivation here, to invest more time on dishes that build health and cut on preservatives and artificial flavors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25155279503 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78428056751 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.9309977466 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.733333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0755710566783 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258527032327 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269090686521 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.050307011036 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228701652499 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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