In this day and age, many young people tend to leave their home at the youth to another city for work or study. Although this action has some negatives for teenagers, its advantages can offset its disadvantages. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss some benefits of leaving home at the early age.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support leaving home from young people to other cities for education or finding a job. At first, Although the study in a far city and away from their families maybe has financial issues for the young people, they can learn how to stay on their foot. they can solve their little problems and become self-confident as well. For example, before, my younger brother was very depended on our parent, but after one year studying far away from home, he became an independent person.
In addition, while away from home might have rational problems for young people, their problems can be covered by better financial opportunities. they can find a good job with more income in other cities rather than working in their own city. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by THN University in 2016 shows that a significant number of people have got their ideal job after migration to other cities or even foreign countries.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about leaving the family to a far city in early age, my personal sentiment is that the benefits of sending teenagers to another city for education or work are far outweighed of its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85114503817 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53168546004 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580152671756 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8809987427 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.545454545 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286650005937 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125042905593 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093981769681 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178851521416 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775289489357 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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