Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with the younger people for the same jobs.
What problems this causes?
What are solutions?
With the increment in the fierce competition, job hunting and cracking any interview has become a difficult task and plethora of people go without any satisfying job throughout their career. Due to this, more elder employees are competing with the young interns resulting in more intense competition. This has lead to many problems for the organisations, individuals and society.
Undoubtedly, elder people have more experience and are they are first choice for many companies. However, with the passing time their health deteriorate and eventually, their productivity suffers. This decrease in productivity of employees can be a major setback for any organisation. Individually, freshers do not get satisfying job and live their live in stress and choose the path of crime for day to day living. This even affect our society a useful assets are turned into liability on which huge resources are spent.
Some front foot actions are required from establishment and organisation in order to cope and solve this issue. Government should set up an age limit for every job so that their will be a fair chance for fresh students who are looking for a job. Further more, more job opportunities should be created. Organisations should provide trainings so that interns can get some experience and can crack interviews. For an instance, Fast-track Scheme can train students during their graduations and help them to get job after their schools.
In retro inspection it is clear that the competition between young and elder is harmful equation and above mentioned solutions can help authorities to ease this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'elder' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: elder
...b throughout their career. Due to this, more elder employees are competing with the young ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'asset'?
Suggestion: asset
.... This even affect our society a useful assets are turned into liability on which huge...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25680933852 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93022203147 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614785992218 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6868256554 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196519387467 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072653932554 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615301556489 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119599280256 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592361888076 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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