Technical advancement has created a new world, which no one could have imagined in previous era. Although it has brought flexibility, comfort and standardized the way of living, but it has also increased the demand in people to get things done as quickly as possible, in other word human being have become impatient. In my opinion, this behavior of human being is taking them away from humanity and intellectual values.
There are three key factor cultivating these kind of habit in civilian, firstly, due to expectation. As people spend exorbitant amount in buying any product or service, they expect things to get delivered or become available on time. For example, if a person buy a latest car model and delivery doesn’t happen on expected time, the person become impatience and may have to procrastinate the plan because of delay in delivery. Secondly, due to busy lifestyle people do not want to waste their time in waiting for anything, as everyone is running around for achieving some goal and in this situation wasting time can ruin anything. Lastly, people want to show off their opulence to other by acquiring any new gadget or vehicle, which incite envy in other and create desire to get those things instantly. So all above points clearly indicates the reason which is encouraging this behavior in human beings.
All these reasons are making human being less patience and more arrogant, and dragging them towards inhumanity. To exemplify, when a person order food online and due to some valid reasons if a delivery boy deliver the food after expected time. The customer without asking any justification shout on delivery boy, which shows the inhumanity in a person because of impatience. Similarly there are other reasons which implies that desire of inhabitant are dragging us to the dark side.
To sum up, human being have become impact ice with time, which is indirectly leading them to lose our cultural values and ethnic value.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'factors'?
Suggestion: factors
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'factor' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'factors'.
Suggestion: factors
...tellectual values. There are three key factor cultivating these kind of habit in civi...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, for example, kind of, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01538461538 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62002484292 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603076923077 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5629392527 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.428571429 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108160377464 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343445310554 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393035893251 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0536758121314 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434440617447 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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